“The Case of the Phantom Portrait” is a wizard detective story loosely inspired by The Picture of Dorian Gray. The wizard detective, Fhiad, is a university mage who travels to a Gothic manor after being hired by a duchess to locate a portrait that’s gone missing after her husband died. The scenes of the story are divided by Fhiad’s letters to a colleague at his university, Agnes, and he’s able to solve the mystery because of the assistance she provides in her terse replies.
Fhiad and Agnes are characters from An Unfound Door, an original gothic fantasy novel that I’m currently preparing to query. They’re in their mid-twenties in the novel, and the story takes place a decade or two later, when they have more stable personalities. Fhiad is charming and kind, and Agnes is as sharp as a knife and uninterested in bullshit.
To simplify somewhat, Agnes is Sherlock Holmes, and Fhiad is William of Baskerville (from The Name of the Rose).
Agnes never actually appears in person in “The Case of the Phantom Portrait,” and I was worried that she’s an extraneous element. I sent the story to three separate copy editors, though, and all three of them said – completely independently of the job they were hired to do – that Agnes was their favorite character.
That’s good, then. I’d love to write more wizard detective stories. In the meantime, I hope Agnes is a compelling enough character to get at least one agent interested in the novel.
This is Fhiad (as drawn by
Armd39), by the way. I like to think he has a certain appeal of his own:
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